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The Lonely P

Eli wrote his very first story a few weeks ago called The Lonely P.  I thought I’d post it for my new friends Kim Kautzer and Debbie Oldar, authors of WriteShop.  They were our wonderful, WONDERFUL booth neighbors at the Midwest Homeschool Convention last week.  They are such sweet mentors!  Be sure to check out their writing programs!

The Loney P, by Eli, age 4
Once upon a time there were pools that the lonely P swam in. Some kids and dads and moms swam there, too.
The P made a friend, the number 2.
The P swam in one pool and the 2 swam in another pool.
He was a happy P now.

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  1. Oh, this couldn’t be sweeter, Cindy! I’m so happy you posted his simple writing efforts. My son used to dictate the most wonderful little stories to me when he was young, too.

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